This week I have been working solidly on production. I've put together the rest of scene two and added to scene 3. I still need to finish the conclusion.
Inspiration:
Process:
- I took inspiration from different newspapers I'd seen online
- I used the image trace to embed real pictures onto the cover of the papers
- I used photoshop to replicate the newspapers
Where I am now:
Strengths:
- I'm much happier with the narrative and I think it makes sense
- Although I haven't added much sound I think what I have so far works pretty well
Need to improve:
- Add titles to the beginning - could use wind sounds
- 00:31 - improve Manon's walk
- 00:33 - amend background colour
- 00:35 needs to be a shot in between
- 01:01 fix Manon's weird arm
- Add backgrounds (blue screens)
- 02:32 Fix animation of explosion
- Add another shot to the ending
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