I spoke with Paul in this session as I was having doubts about my storyline. He helped me identify the key points and what was missing. I know that the genre I'd chosen was fantasy/drama which alludes to real life events, but I don't want to dwell too much on the latter. Paul suggested that I take a more political stance, and more explicitly explore conflicting identities, for example if one sister was religious and the other more secular. I don't feel as though I could go down this route appropriately without conducting a lot of research. At this point in the term I don't feel like I have enough time to change my direction this much. Instead I would like to keep my characters the same but perhaps think about how I can really demonstrate their personalities to the audience. I also need to create an ending that has an impact on the audience.
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