I've put together the first draft for the animation
Strengths:
- I like the pacing, I think it's slow and ambiguous and will hopefully intrigue the audience
- Colour palette - I worked hard on making sure the colours were consistent throughout the scene
Need to improve:
- Make the backgrounds/skies all the same colour
- Tighten up the edit - some weird flashes happen
I wanted to add a shot after 0:30 which was a close up of Manon's feet as she walked towards the bridge. However I was struggling to make the walk cycle look realistic.
Finally, I added a shot to the end of the sequence, which showed Manon looking over the bridge. However for some reason, when I exported the file, the last shot was missing. I tried to fix this but couldn't find a solution. Here is what the final shot of the scene was supposed to look like:


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