Strengths:
- I'm really happy with the colour scheme within this scene, I think its very consistent
- I think that the narrative is easy to follow, even without sound at this point
Need to improve:
- I didn't finish animating the last few shots, for example the final shot hasn't been finished yet
- Dancing animation should look more realistic, at the moment it looks quite robotic
- In the penultimate shot, I need to make it look as though Manon is walking, not gliding
- There are some errors: Manon's lips change colour; some backgrounds are the wrong resolution; some backgrounds have pieces missing
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