I had previously emailed Mary my first draft of my first scene the feedback was:
- The scene works well and makes sense
- Walk cycle needs some more bounce to it
- Good use of colour and line on Eiffel Tower and Trees
- Possibly use a thinner line weighting around the roads
- Add more colour gradient to the sky, so that it looks more realistic
Today we had further tutorial with Mary to discuss our progress. Overall I think I'm doing okay and working well towards completing the scenes. Mary suggested that I try to create a sound design for one of my scenes. I think this would be useful to think about now, since I'm not too confident with sound design, so it's better not to leave it to last minute
Practical
In this session, I continued to work on the third scene of my animation. I think this scene is going well so far, although some of my animation could be a bit tighter.
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